Hi Ben, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you made the background A REALLY CUTE PUPPY! I LOVE IT! The font of the words is very satisfying but you could have highlighted it so that it is not hard to read. Was this made around your topic? I love dogs and have three of them at home. When I spotted your work I needed to read it! You have wrote about one of the things you need to do for dog safety but what about... muzzles, collars and microchips because that would make your post way more interesting! Great work, Ben!
Hi Ben, it's Tahlia here from Awahono School. I really like the background you choose because it is a adorable golden retriever and they are my favourite. I also like how you said we should approach the dog and the owner. Maybe next time you could make your writing a different colour so I can read it a bit better. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Hi Ben, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you made the background A REALLY CUTE PUPPY! I LOVE IT! The font of the words is very satisfying but you could have highlighted it so that it is not hard to read. Was this made around your topic? I love dogs and have three of them at home. When I spotted your work I needed to read it! You have wrote about one of the things you need to do for dog safety but what about... muzzles, collars and microchips because that would make your post way more interesting! Great work, Ben!
ReplyDeleteHi Ben, it's Tahlia here from Awahono School. I really like the background you choose because it is a adorable golden retriever and they are my favourite. I also like how you said we should approach the dog and the owner. Maybe next time you could make your writing a different colour so I can read it a bit better. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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