Kia Ora Ben, I am Jason from Belfast School. I really like the descriptive language you have used in your poem like green grass. Why did you use my mum, my dog, and I twice? Maybe next time you could explain what some of the words in your blogpost mean like parkside wharf. What was your favourite part of writing this poem?
Kia Ora Ben, I am from belfast school . I really like this poem because all the detail you put into this, I also like how you put something weird and unusual. Why did you use my dog, my mum, and I twice? Maybe next time you could add soe more imformation at the end.
Kia Ora Ben, I am Jason from Belfast School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the descriptive language you have used in your poem like green grass. Why did you use my mum, my dog, and I twice? Maybe next time you could explain what some of the words in your blogpost mean like parkside wharf. What was your favourite part of writing this poem?
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ben, I am from belfast school .
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem because all the detail you put into this, I also like how you put something weird and unusual. Why did you use my dog, my mum, and I twice? Maybe next time you could add soe more imformation at the end.
Sincerly-Josh