I love this poem about your favourite animal - you have not quite got the syllables corect but it is a great attempt. Keep it up.
Ben I like how you did your cinquain poem about your favourite animal a dog. Maybe next time you could do it about another animal like a zebra. Keep up the good work!
Hi Ben I like the writing I love huskies too from Quinn
Hi Ben I like how you did a poem about the most awesome dog breed, maybe next time you could add a little more writing. Good job for trying your best
I love this poem about your favourite animal - you have not quite got the syllables corect but it is a great attempt. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteBen I like how you did your cinquain poem about your favourite animal a dog. Maybe next time you could do it about another animal like a zebra. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ben I like the writing I love huskies too from Quinn
ReplyDeleteHi Ben I like how you did a poem about the most awesome dog breed, maybe next time you could add a little more writing. Good job for trying your best
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