Hi Ben it's Millie from Belfast school, I really like all the information you told us about dog safety I could see you put some thought and effort into it.I liked the part when you told us about how you should ask the owner before patting it. Next time try and change the colour of the words because it blended into the background and it was quite hard to read. How long did it take you to make this?
Hi Ben, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you made the background A REALLY CUTE PUPPY! I LOVE IT! The font of the words is very satisfying but you could have highlighted it so that it is not hard to read. Was this made around your topic? I love dogs and have three of them at home. When I spotted your work I needed to read it! You have wrote about one of the things you need to do for dog safety but what about... muzzles, collars and microchips because that would make your post way more interesting! Great work, Ben!
Hi Ben, it's Tahlia here from Awahono School. I really like the background you choose because it is a adorable golden retriever and they are my favourite. I also like how you said we should approach the dog and the owner. Maybe next time you could make your writing a different colour so I can read it a bit better. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Hi Ben it's Millie from Belfast school, I really like all the information you told us about dog safety I could see you put some thought and effort into it.I liked the part when you told us about how you should ask the owner before patting it. Next time try and change the colour of the words because it blended into the background and it was quite hard to read. How long did it take you to make this?
ReplyDeleteHi Ben, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you made the background A REALLY CUTE PUPPY! I LOVE IT! The font of the words is very satisfying but you could have highlighted it so that it is not hard to read. Was this made around your topic? I love dogs and have three of them at home. When I spotted your work I needed to read it! You have wrote about one of the things you need to do for dog safety but what about... muzzles, collars and microchips because that would make your post way more interesting! Great work, Ben!
ReplyDeleteHi Ben, it's Tahlia here from Awahono School. I really like the background you choose because it is a adorable golden retriever and they are my favourite. I also like how you said we should approach the dog and the owner. Maybe next time you could make your writing a different colour so I can read it a bit better. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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